Taking
the baton from author K.K. Weil, is author Amity Grays
The It
place to be, Mallory Square was jam-packed with an eclectic mix of tourists and
locals, all there to check out the shops and boardwalk entertainment while
waiting for the famous sunset to fall over the Gulf of Mexico.
Lana and the
crew were no exception. They’d hit just about every tourist attraction on
Maddie’s must-see list and way too many of the vendors in between. Now,
strolling through the crowds, toting much lighter wallets and sacks packed with
souvenirs, they were ready to relax and let themselves be entertained.
“Over there.” Ray lifted his arm directly in front
of Lana’s face, giving her nose a playful bump as he pointed a finger to yet
another boardwalk gathering.
“Do you really have to do that?” she asked, swatting
away the limb as she turned her gaze to the not-so-small assembly. At the front
of the gathering, facing the crowd, a man wearing a pork pie hat sat on a stool
tuning his guitar.
“I think that’s the guy my aunt was telling me about.”
Maddie’s face lit with excitement. She reached into her pocket and pulled out
her list of must-sees. She poked a finger halfway down the page. “Pork pie
hat—it’s him. She says he’s really good.”
Sophie lowered her sunglasses to peek over their
rims. “Oh la la, really good-looking, you mean.” In the very next second, she
was gone, beelining her way to front-row ogling.
Maddie fisted the list into a wad and shoved it back
inside her pocket. “Hey, Soph, wait for me.”
“Well,” Kyle said with a sigh, “at least it isn’t
shopping.” He sauntered into the crowd.
Lana watched, an all-too-familiar tingle dancing a
two-step around her heart. The feeling didn’t last long. The moment Sabrina ran
forward and took hold of his arm, it flickered and died. Not even Kyle’s look
of indifference could bring it back to life.
“He probably wishes he’d stayed home,” said Ray,
watching the same exchange. Grabbing hold of Lana’s arm, he mimicked the
bombshell blonde. “Kyle, I’m thirsty. Kyle, carry my bags. Kyle, you’re not
listening to me, Kyle.”
Unable to hide her amusement or deny the truth of
it, Lana merely smiled and headed for the crowd. Ray followed at her heels.
Kyle had caved and decided to come along only after
she refused to bail on their friends. At first, she’d been secretly ecstatic,
but the excitement had since worn off. With Kyle came Sabrina, and all she’d
done was complain. Though, Ray was right, the whines seemed directly related to
Kyle’s less-than-attentive responses to her unmerciful attentions.
Something was up between the two of them, Lana just
couldn’t put her finger on what. A part of her wished she’d agreed to stay
behind. Maybe that what was one of
the things Kyle had wanted to talk to
her about.
The musician looked up. “Hello, Everyone. Welcome to
Mallory Square.”
Even from the very back of an enthusiastic crowd,
Lana could still hear Sophie’s squeal.
An impressive rendition of Garth Brooks’ Friends in Low Places rang over the
cheers of the throng. Ray wrapped his arm around her and boisterously sang out
the chorus each time it came around.
She’d always enjoyed Ray. He was the
good-old-boy-next-door kind of guy, always good natured, always reliable.
Nice looking to boot. Maybe not Kyle’s,
Lord-have-mercy-there’s-another-Hemsworth variety, but handsome all the same. “Built, brilliant, brown-eyed hottie,” Maddie had once
described him.
Back in college, the hottie had his own personal fan club. The Geekette Squad, he’d affectionately called them—computer geeks,
just like him, only the female variety. He’d almost married one. Molly was her
name. She was the sister of his fraternity’s president and the reason Ray ended
up with the unlikely crew he hung with today. A bad breakup had left him
homeless. Lana and Maddie had needed a third roommate…and so history was made.
“Not bad,” he said as the singer wrapped up the
song.
Lana stuck a finger in her ear and wiggled it.
“What’s that? I can’t hear you. Some idiot kept screaming in my ear.”
Ray smiled and pulled the finger away. “Don’t
worry,” he yelled. “What you have is easily treated these days.”
Several around them turned and stared. Kyle and
Sabrina, the only gang members close
enough to hear, burst out laughing.
An hour later, they all stood near the docks
admiring the breathtaking sunset as it cast its orange rays up, down, and
across the waterfront; turning everything it touched to a magnificent gold.
Maddie snuggled up next to her, giving her arm an
affectionate squeeze. “Now, aren’t you glad you came?”
“I am. It’s been fun, and I’ve got some great
souvenirs to take home to the folks.”
“Yeah, so does Sophie.”
Their gazes both moved to the railing where Sophie
and her new friend, the singer/guitarist, stood holding hands.
“She looks so happy,” Lana noted.
“Are you kidding me?” Maddie laughed. “She’s
ecstatic. Her mother will so not
approve.”
Lana’s gaze drifted further down the wharf to land
on two broad sets of shoulders—one Kyle’s, the others, Ray’s. For once, Sabrina
was nowhere to be seen. They’d lost her a while back to the bedazzle of a
jewelry vendor.
Maddie gave her a nudge. “You should go talk to
him.”
“Kyle?” Of course, she meant Kyle. Her friend knew
her so well.
“I think you threw him for a loop when you turned
him down earlier.”
She’d sensed it too. He’d expected her to stay, and
it was exactly that truth which made her glad she hadn’t. For the first time
since she met him, she walked away feeling as though she’d gotten the upper
hand. Not that there was any kind of competition. She idolized him and tried to
hide it. He knew it, but pretended he had no idea.
“I think I’ll wait. Come on, Maddie, let’s get a
better look at the horizon.”
She was leaning against the railing, watching the
boats sail through the sunset, when a deep voice whispered in her ear, “You
know, I’ve heard it’s good luck to be kissed under a golden sky.”
Okay, Reader’s
Choice, who should it be.
A.
Ray
B. Kyle
You
have until Tuesday evening, 11 EST to vote.
Definitely A. I love their playfulness.
ReplyDeleteA-Ray
ReplyDeleteKyle is starting to remind me of Elle Woods old boyfriend in Legally Blonde
A. Ray
ReplyDeleteB. Kyle
ReplyDeleteLet's get this party started.
B. Kyle
ReplyDeleteB. Kyle
ReplyDeleteA. Ray
ReplyDeleteDefinitely A. Loving Ray!
ReplyDeleteHope I'm not too late with my comment. Ray may seem like the best choice for our heroine, but maybe not for the story. Shake things up. Kiss Kyle. Get confused. Work for your HEA.
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