Taking over from Amity Grays is author DeeDee Lane
A
flash of white suede, blonde hair, and pink zipped across his line of vision.
Ha! There she was Clarisse Heartfelt, successful romance author, conference
speaker, and his quarry. He wasn’t doing anything creepy he just wanted to talk
to her for a few minutes. Her theme of infusing passion in characters had
really resonated…he had to get more information.
Nick Valentini squared
his shoulders and stepped forward. “Hello, I’m Nick, big fan and fellow romance
writer.” He was talking to the air. Ms. Heartfelt waltzed right past him and
headed out the revolving door.
“Wait!” He pasted a
large grin on his face, and thought happy not-a-stalker thoughts.
If she looked behind
and saw him following he’d be sunk. At six foot three inches he towered over
the petite writer. His large or what he liked to call his awesomely stately
nose proclaimed his Italian heritage along with his longish black hair. Broad
shoulders made people think he was former football player but could also mark
him as someone to avoid on the street corner.
He
watched her stumble, pause. She’d heard him! Clambering in the revolving door
he followed as it swooped her out and him in. She took a step then just as he
exited swayed once, twice, and plummeted to the ground.
He caught her one
second too late. The cradle of his arms managed to keep most of her head off
the ground. Oh mio Dio. Her skin was
pale as a ghost, waxy to the touch, nothing like the vibrant woman he’d seen
lecture just moments before. He set her on the ground. She was still, suddenly lifeless.
“Call 911.” He bellowed
to the sidewalk gawkers.
Fumbling for her pulse
he pushed aside a soft pink scarf. Nothing. He didn’t exactly work in the
medical field but as a technical writer he’d written enough training CPR webinars
to know the rules. Nick grasped her shoulders to give a firm shake, “Clarisse
wake up!” With the “Shake and Shout” step completed there was still no sign of
life. He slipped out of his suitcoat, folded it and tucked it to cushion her
head.
“What’s wrong with her? Is she drunk?”
“Excuse me, fella, get
outta the wa—oh sorry.”
“911 operator wants to
know if she’s breathing.”
Nick filtered out the
comments of the New York commuters and focused on Clarisse. Bits of concrete
dug into his knees as he bent over to listen.
“Not breathing.” He
called out to the woman on the cell phone. “I’m starting CPR.” He loosened
Clarisse’s coat, pulled the neckline open as much as he dared. Finding his
rhythm with the chest compressions he counted to thirty followed by two rescue
breaths.
Instructions from his
last webinar project “How to Perform CPR,” flitted in and out of his mind....
Compressing
the chest rapidly up and down moves blood through the brain, keeping it alive
until the heart can get started again.
Arms aching he kept
counting, and breathing. “C’mon Clarisse…get your heart going.” An acid taste
of panic watered his mouth, he swallowed it down, had to keep going.
“Darling…my heart is on
fire, your touch is magic.”
Nick looked over his shoulder,
what the hell? Even for New Yorkers this was a weird comment.
The husky voice
murmured. “I may be dead but I’m not done, it’s you and me big guy”
He gazed wildly around.
Three feet away, sitting on the edge of a nearby fountain lounged Clarisse
Heartfelt. He blinked. Yep…still there. She crooked her finger. Her gaze
smoldered with intensity and…life?
“I’m talking to you
writer boy, you’re my ride back to the top.” The ghost Clarisse practically purred.
“Think of me as your guardian angel.”
Small freckled hands moved
his aside, a soft voice spoke in his ear. “Great job mister, we’ll take it from
here.”
EMT’s had arrived.
Stumbling back his butt hit hard on the pavement. He shifted aside so the efficient
tech could do her job. She and the male tech hooked Clarisse up to oxygen and
readied her to be moved.
The metal stretcher
banged down with a clatter. A large hairy hand clapped him on the back, pulled
him to standing.
“Yo Nico! What chu
doin’ uptown?”
He stifled a groan, of
all the luck. The male EMT was his second cousin Ricky. He imagined telling his
burly cousin the truth.
“Yo
Ricky, I have a secret and so far unsuccessful life as a romance writer. I came
to hear a famous author speak about infusing passion in my stories.”
Ricky would call him pazzo, punch him in the arm and be on
the phone to his mother, four sisters, and two brothers in the time it took to
load Clarisse on the ambulance. By the time he got off the subway his mother
would be crying at his kitchen table saying, “You’ll neva find a nice girl with
such a sissy job.”
Instead he answered
something Italian men of all ages would understand. “Yo Ricky, got a place
around the corner, has good deli meat.”
“Ah ta ta.” Came a sing
song admonishment from the second Clarisse. “You’re lying.” She stood and
opened her arms wide, embracing the world, embracing him. A pink glow shimmered
and quaked between them. “C’mon Nick Valentini, it’s your first test…shout it. I
am a romance writer.”
He looked at Ricky, the
female EMT, the ogling bystanders; none of them showed signs they saw or heard Clarisse.
“How do you know my
name?”
Ricky guffawed, “Ah,
dude, I gave ya wedgies every day when we was in kindergarten.”
“I wasn’t talking to
you.”
“Den who was ya talkin’
to?”
All right Readers – YOU
DECIDE is it?
Choice A:
Nick confesses he’s seeing the Ghost of Clarisse and is taken to the hospital
to have his head examined.
OR
Choice B:
Nick vows to undertake Clarisse’s first test, and shouts, “I am a romance
writer.”
Beautifully done. I love it, and definitely A.
ReplyDeleteI'll choose A.
ReplyDeleteGreat job! I choose A.
ReplyDeleteOh, I think B will create quite a tense scene, hehe.
ReplyDeleteI think it should be A.
ReplyDeleteI vote for Choice B
ReplyDeleteB - Time to start embracing it, buddy.
ReplyDeleteMy friend Wendy can't vote without some kind of sign-up so asked me to vote for her. Wendy says B.
ReplyDeleteAnd my friend Lisa wasn't able to vote. (Is there something I need to tell people to make this easier?) Lisa says "I'll vote for A because then the story has somewhere to go, although I’d prefer him to just walk away and stew about his ghost girl."
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